Allison TS#12

06/07/2018
Tutoring Session #12 of 16

Topic: Writing
Materials: previous essays, conclusion worksheet

Today PJ and I continued to review FSA past essay prompts. We went over the essay he had for homework; he argued whether video games were good for students or not. We analyzed what makes an effective argument in his essay. Then we compared his essay to sample argumentative essays from the FSA 2018 prompts. He was happy to see that his essay had good structure, such as clearly outlining his thesis and main points in each paragraph. We still need to work on adding details through more adjectives and modifiers, however, PJ has a good grasp on the fundamental structure of an essay. 

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