Allison TS#14

06/18/2018
Tutoring Session #14 of 16

Topic: Writing
Materials: previous essays
We read PJ's essay that he worked on while he was at camp. He admitted that he did not have a lot of time to work on his essay that past week, so I gave him some time go back and improve his writing. Then we compared his essay to the rubric, just like we have in previous sessions. I can tell that his transitions and organizational skills have improved greatly since we started. His planning skills with the graphic organizer also have improved. He now has a strong plan and a method for approaching these essays, so I think we can move on from expository prompts soon.

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