Mane-TS#6


Tutoring # 6

For our sixth tutoring session, I decided to give the reading lessons a bit of a break and do a writing lesson. I helped Abdulrahman in writing legal summaries. Since we had been reading them before he was already familiar with how they are supposed to look like. I give him a worksheet with instructions on how to write briefs and one example worksheet. Afterwards, I helped him write one legal brief.

He had previously also asked my help in writing his Statement of Purpose for his law school applications. I read his Statement of Purpose and provided feedback. We also discussed how essays are usually written in America and what the law school will expect him to write in his Statement of Purpose.

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